<<Findings of new data (uncertainly of validity of the
comparison between the two hospitals) have been discussed at the end of the
“Results” section, as well as the “Discussion” section.>>
Considering the latest data had surfaced new findings, that
have been discussed in the paragraphs above, at this stage of the research, the
final results should be considered spurious and a new extended research should
be conducted. It should include new variables such as patient income, age and
level of satisfaction with the health-care provider. Furthermore, I strongly
believe that the inclusion of these variables would improve the study, as they
provide insightful data that could constitute an alternative basis for this
research.
Ilka Groenewold (6444508)
ReplyDeleteAaron Gowen
Course 53.627 Composition I and II for Linguistics
In conclusion, this paper was written in order to examine health care costs of both non-profit and for-profit organizations in the United States. As the tables show, in non-profit hospitals the impact of health care costs was relatively minor, whereas in other contexts the cost increase registered was considerable. As a matter of fact, in the latter case the reduced co-payments apparently gave rise to a remarkable number of tests ordered by physicians. Still, the above findings should be considered somewhat provisional at this stage. This is because the patients of the two different types of organization have not been differentiated nor categorized by variables such as patient income, age and level of satisfaction with the health-care provider.
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